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WBUR
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Tue, Nov 12, 2013
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by Mike Kalin
Any experienced
English teacher knows the drill: on the dreaded due date, students bring
printed copies of their essays to class, where we collect them, take them home,
jot inscrutable comments in the margins, bring them back to class, return them,
and then watch students promptly toss them in the recycling bin on the way out
of the room. The whole cycle borders on farce. Students pretend to spend many
hours writing their papers, teachers pretend to spend many hours grading them,
and we all pretend like repeating this process over and over again leads to
something we in education like to call “student growth.” But teachers can
finally put an end to this exercise in futility, thanks to an unlikely hero
sometimes condemned for its unrelenting pursuit of profit at the expense of the
public good…Google.
Ever since I made my students aware that I
could easily spot cursory revisions, I’ve noticed substantial improvement in
the quality of their writing.
Google’s online word
processor, Google Docs, has entirely transformed the way teachers can support
students through the writing process, from the very first brainstorming
activity to the feedback provided to students on their final drafts.
To illustrate, I’ll
use my experience helping students write essays about the most beloved and/or
despised staple of high school American literature courses, “The Great Gatsby.”
Let’s start with a brainstorming session. At the beginning of a class, I ask my
students to enter a response to the following prompt into a shared Google Doc:
“When I think of ‘The Great Gatsby,’ one word that comes to mind is….” Five
minutes later, the Google Doc projected on a large screen at the front of the
room is filled with origins of essay topics: ”disillusionment,” “American
Dream,” “obsession,” and “self-deception,” to name a consistent few. Especially
for weaker students, the collaborative nature of this exercise exposes them to
ideas in a manner that the old practice of independent journaling cannot. This
method also gives a voice to the introverted students in class whose often
brilliant ideas now receive the attention they deserve.
Onto the composition
process, where Google Doc’s sharing function changes the nature of
communication between teacher and student. Because each of my students writes a
draft of their essay using a Google Doc that is shared with me, I can immediately
reply to questions that students pose in the margins of their document, rather
than waiting until students bring a printed copy to class a few days later. I
can also intervene if I notice that a student begins an essay with something
like, “In ‘The Great Gatsby,’ the plot is crucial to the novel, as it both
impacts the beginning of the story and leads to its denooment[sic].” No need to
make this poor kid spend hours writing a draft that will read like a Harvard
Lampoon spoof. Sharing documents also increases student accountability for
meeting deadlines, an advantage not to be dismissed, especially for younger
students still learning time management skills.
The sharing function of Google Docs enables
teachers and students to communicate in the margins of a document during the
composition process. Students can also share their essays with other classmates
in order to receive immediate peer feedback. (Courtesy of the author)
Perhaps most
dramatically transformed by the use of Google Docs is the revision process. An
often unknown feature is something called a “revision history.” With one click
of a button, the revision history allows me to bring up a literally minute-by-minute
account of all of the changes that were made to an essay. Because most
students’ perceptions of the revision process entail changing a few appearances
of the word “but” to “however” and substituting “pestiferous” for “bad,” this
feature is invaluable as a way to help students self-reflect upon the evolution
of their essay. Ever since I made my students aware that I could easily spot
cursory revisions, I’ve noticed substantial improvement in the quality of their
writing.
At the end of the
writing cycle is the part when teachers do their best to provide feedback that
will resonate with students and here again, Google Docs is a game changer. A
Google Doc app called Kaizena allows me to provide oral commentary with my
laptop’s built-in microphone that students can listen to the very instant that
I am done recording. Each one of my spoken comments corresponds with a
highlighted phrase or section of the essay on the Google Doc, conveying
feedback in a manner that makes my former method of scribbling opaque phrases
like “needs more work here!” in the margins look totally antiquated. Using the
recorder enables me to increase both the quantity and quality of my comments,
and most importantly, my students report that they find this technique much
more beneficial. They explain that hearing the respectful tone of a teacher’s
voice makes them less threatened when delivered constructive criticism. One
student remarked that it felt like I was sitting right next to him in his room
as he listened to me explain the strengths and weaknesses of his essay. A
little creepy, yes, but the culmination of this process, quite revolutionary in
my mind, sure beats a crumpled-up essay on its way to the recycling center.
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